Would like some critiques on this :)

9 years 8 months ago #392065 by Noah-Musick


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9 years 8 months ago #392066 by KCook
The sleeveless vest isn't helping, but the wardrobe may be beyond your control.  Pretty face, I'd like to see a light from camera left to give the face more form and brighten up the eyes.  Nice background!

Kelly

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9 years 8 months ago #392109 by Leilanee
I love the tall grass! I would probably play around in post and lighten up your model while subtly darkening the background so attention is naturally drawn to your model and not the bright background. You have her facing the right way (to achieve even tones considering your light source), she just needs a bit of brightening up!


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9 years 8 months ago #392485 by ubookoo
Beautiful model and great location. For me, I would prefer less head room and a bit lower angle to allow more in line focus on her gorgeous eyes. A little tilt to the head and balancing the whites in her eyes would be a small tweak as well. The only other small nit is the grass blade across the front of her outfit.


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9 years 8 months ago #392531 by Kristy Blake
Beautiful model, love the grass, but not feeling the wardrobe either.  


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9 years 8 months ago #392533 by JeremyS

Kristy Blake wrote: Beautiful model, love the grass, but not feeling the wardrobe either.  


I agree with Kristy and Kelly. 

I also will agree that its a bit better if you got a bit lower to get better eye contact with the model, it will make her eyes pop just a bit more. I am with leilanee as well in terms of darkening the background just slightly, in order to make the image a bit more 3 dimensional. Good luck!


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9 years 7 months ago #401239 by Simon Says
Nice shot, looking forward to seeing more. 


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9 years 7 months ago #402474 by Travel Nut
Very nicely done, loving the mood.


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