Advice on photos please :) Trying to decide my level of professionalism/quality

9 years 2 weeks ago #435081 by brokenwings3794


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9 years 2 weeks ago #435086 by garyrhook
You're looking for constructive criticism? Okay.  If not, just move along; nothing to see here.

For me:

Overall, good job.

#1: the light is flat, which many people do not care for. I don't see flash, so it was just the light where you were located? Excellent focus, i like the angle, pose, and crop. And DoF.

#2: I can't tell what's actually in focus, so that's the biggest downside for me. I think you've made effective use of a matte look, and the color toning is very nice. Good DoF, although I'd crop out some of the space on the left to get her out of the center. It looks like you were shooting through something?

#3: Excellent focus, color, toning, retouching (if there was any) and light. Not a fan of the 50mm (here or #1) but well executed, IMO. I'm not sure I'm loving the hands in this crop; perhaps placing them differently would be better?

The question you must ask yourself is, can you do this consistently and on demand? That's a sometimes definition of "pro". Quality-wise, I think you're doing quite well. You just need an 85mm lens :-)

My $0.02, of course.


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9 years 2 weeks ago #435087 by brokenwings3794
Thank you for your advice!

It is definitely tricky to be consistent, but I've really been working hard at updating my equipment and getting to know it very well. I'll be getting my 85mm one soon enough!

Also, for #1, how would you recommend I prevent the light from being flat? Should I have used a flash in such bright light?


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9 years 2 weeks ago #435089 by tganiats
I like graynhook's comments.  Some more 2 cents...I like that there are 3 different "feels;" that you aren't in a rut with just one look.


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9 years 2 weeks ago #435099 by KCook
#1  I assume this was on location, not in a studio?  Flash can fix the lighting, but my flash skills are nothing to brag about.  I would try a reflector first.  Or just pick up and move to another spot with better light.

#2  My monitor picks up a red tint to the shadows (hair).  Maybe that was part of your style?  If not, work on WB skills more.

#3  I agree on the hands needing something.  Again, that red tint.

With shots this small it's hard to scope out your post processing.  Unless you used it to deliberately introduce that tint?

It's easy to focus exclusively on camera skills at first.  My suggestion is to pay more attention to the light.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
kellycook.zenfolio.com/

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