Black and white serie

4 years 11 months ago #643918 by cwolfphoto
Hi guys, I did these black and white serie. What do you guys think? Would love to get some cc!Thank you!
Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF56mmF1.2 R
ISO: 100
Aperture: f/1.2
Shutter speed: 1/500 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:27pm


Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF56mmF1.2 R
ISO: 100
Aperture: f/1.2
Shutter speed: 1/60 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:32pm


Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF56mmF1.2 R
ISO: 100
Aperture: f/1.2
Shutter speed: 1/500 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:28pm


Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF56mmF1.2 R
ISO: 250
Aperture: f/1.2
Shutter speed: 1/200 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:47pm


Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF23mmF1.4 R
ISO: 400
Aperture: f/1.4
Shutter speed: 1/160 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:50pm


Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF23mmF1.4 R
ISO: 400
Aperture: f/1.4
Shutter speed: 1/160 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:55pm


Make: FUJIFILM
Model: X-H1
Lens: XF23mmF1.4 R
ISO: 400
Aperture: f/1.4
Shutter speed: 1/160 sec
Captured: Sat, 23 Mar 2019 17:57pm


Photo Comments
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4 years 11 months ago #643982 by Lauren Grant
The third shot is I think the most successful but the top crop is too tight. 


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4 years 11 months ago #643984 by Nikon Shooter

Lauren Grant wrote: The third shot is I think the most successful but the top crop is too tight. 


:agree:

Light is free… capturing it is not!
Photo Comments
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4 years 11 months ago #644033 by garyrhook
Re: #3: the crop isn't too tight, it's wrong. You've got this thing in the lower left that is distracting and unimportant, and should be removed, you need to get her out of the center, and people have an aversion to cropping in the middle of hands or feet.

Otherwise, I like the shot very much.

Final shot: the cigarette smoke combined with what is behind her head makes for an awkward image. For me. Lose the cigarette (a case can be made for it being cliche) and find a better position. Again, IMO.

#2 and #3 are good fashion style shots. #2 has a foot cropped again.

Your tones, focus, and styling are very good. You have a gift.


Photo Comments
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4 years 11 months ago #644212 by Aaron Rogers
The first shot would have been nice if not with the blown highlights in the hair. It is distracting.
Also, IMO it would always feel awkward watching a photo with the cropped foot like in the 2nd and the 3rd shot. It feels incomplete. 


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4 years 11 months ago #644514 by Breanna Ellington
I think the last three shots did not work for me. The lightbulbs are distracting me from the subjects. Nice tonal range though. 


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4 years 10 months ago #644794 by Kelly Emery
I like the outfit of the second shot and how well it fitted for the B&W shot. 


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4 years 10 months ago #645060 by Eshan Rachit
2 and 3 are best shots indeed
The last 3 shots did not really work for me. 


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4 years 9 months ago #650948 by zachdos
I like last two pictures the most. You have done a good job. Keep it up. 


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4 years 9 months ago #651368 by Alyssa Briggs
The third and the fourth shot are really good. The crops can be worked because it's a bit tight but really good contrast. Highlight is still a bit blown. 


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