Portrait of Svetlana

4 years 7 months ago #656583 by leface
I keep looking for myself in photoghraphy. Now portaits are interesting for me.



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4 years 7 months ago #656676 by Joe Crumley
Somethings gone wrong with this post. Should be removed and re-posted.


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4 years 7 months ago #656704 by Kelly Emery
I don't think so. I can see the photos fine. Nice crop and angles.


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4 years 7 months ago #656740 by Nikon Shooter
Thread appears to be fine.

I fell slightly uneasy with this approach vlrlbdnk. Maybe
the takes are not communicating enough of the model?

Light is free… capturing it is not!
Photo Comments
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4 years 6 months ago #656844 by Jin Hyuk Kwon
The first 2 shots lacks points of interest. There's nothing so special about it.
The 3rd shot is potentially good but the top crop is a bit awkward.
The fourth one could have been really good if the crop is just higher to emphasize the lips.
The focus of the last shot is a bit off.
I like the render though. 


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4 years 6 months ago #657018 by Jack Mason
The fourth shot is indeed the most captivating in here. She has beautiful lips, nice shape and so full. 


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4 years 5 months ago #662918 by Queenofwinter
Black and White portraits are always remaining the classic. I think they reveal the persons character as color never will be able to.


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4 years 4 months ago #664293 by Kira Minori
I agree but some shots lack good focal points. The most successful is the 3rd shot. 


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4 years 4 months ago #664528 by Kyle Johnson
These are potential renders but story-telling in photos has to improve indeed. 


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4 years 4 months ago #665204 by Alyssa Briggs
+1 to the 3rd shot 


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4 years 4 months ago #665210 by leface
Thanks for responding. In what way I need to develop my storytelling? What didn't enough?


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4 years 4 months ago #665693 by Suni Park
To help you with that, I think you should give emphasis to what you really want as a subject. For instance, for the third shot, if you want to give emphasis to emotion in the eyes you could have change the angle a bit to get more of it. 


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