Rock Climbing Composition Feedback

6 years 3 weeks ago #574708 by VikingDinKC
Hello
 
This is my first post on this site so I apologize if this line of question is not typical.  I am trying to improve my composition skills. Attached is a composition I completed of my son climbing.  The story I am trying to tell is one of overcoming your fears (or nerves in this case) and celebrating your
accomplishment.  I feel the composition tells the story but I am trying to improve the visual interest or visual appeal.  Any feedback you have on this composition is appreciated.
 
Thanks in advance for your feedback.    
Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D750
Lens: 24.0-120.0 mm f/4.0
ISO: 1600
Aperture: f/4.0
Shutter speed: 1/400 sec
Captured: Sun, 18 Feb 2018 14:32pm


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6 years 2 weeks ago #576223 by Flash Steven
Sorry not feeling it.  However it the audience is the child in the photo, or their parent.  Yeah, go for it!

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6 years 2 weeks ago #576327 by Frost Photography
Who's the audience for this shot?

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