Would love some feedback/critique on some recent images

3 years 8 months ago #691868 by Scott McKenzie
Hello all,
I'm new here, and have joined because I feel like I've hit a bit of a wall lately. Have been putting in real effort over the last 18 months or so to improve the quality of my photographs. I can see some improvement when I look back through older work, but it feels like I have so, so far still to go. Maybe I've just been looking at too many National Geographic Instagram posts. 

Anyway, here are a few shots I've taken over this past 18 months or so that I'm kind of happy with. I don't think they're perfect, but I like them enough to share. Any feedback, positive or negative, about what looks right throughout this sampling, or what could obviously be improved upon would be appreciated. My general feeling about what I need to do is avoiding overprocessing. I want so badly to have those crystal clear shots every time, and often over sharpen/clarify. If I had to choose one thing I have a little confidence in, it's composition. 

Again, sincere thanks for any constructive criticism.

Make: SONY
Model: ILCE-7RM2
Lens: FE 100-400mm F4.5-5.6 GM OSS
ISO: 160
Aperture: f/5.6
Shutter speed: 1/400 sec
Captured: Fri, 2 Aug 2019 17:38pm
Make: SONY
Model: ILCE-7RM2
Lens: FE 24-105mm F4 G OSS
ISO: 100
Aperture: f/4.0
Shutter speed: 1/400 sec
Captured: Thu, 1 Aug 2019 14:46pm
Make: SONY
Model: ILCE-5100
Lens: E PZ 16-50mm F3.5-5.6 OSS
ISO: 3200
Aperture: f/4.5
Shutter speed: 1/40 sec
Captured: Wed, 26 Dec 2018 14:38pm
Make: SONY
Model: ILCE-7RM2
Lens: FE 16-35mm F2.8 GM
ISO: 100
Aperture: f/2.8
Shutter speed: 1/200 sec
Captured: Thu, 11 Jun 2020 14:00pm


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3 years 8 months ago #691893 by Daryl Flores
This is a good set especially the first shot. The second shot need more sky though for a better perspective. I like the symmetry of the third shot and colors of the 4th shot is really cool. 


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3 years 8 months ago #691896 by Nikon Shooter


All the shots are well rendered but the cut off of the
leg in the first… this is hard.

And I don't like the mosquito on the second leaf of the
fifth branch in the last shot! :rofl:

Well done, Scott! 

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3 years 8 months ago #691897 by Nikon Shooter
ADDENDUM

Maybe you could insert a forced paragraph between the images. :P

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3 years 8 months ago #691902 by Scott McKenzie
Thanks! I had not considered that. I agree; more sky would make it feel a bit more complete.


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3 years 8 months ago #691903 by Scott McKenzie

Nikon Shooter wrote: 

All the shots are well rendered but the cut off of the
leg in the first… this is hard.

And I don't like the mosquito on the second leaf of the
fifth branch in the last shot! :rofl:

Well done, Scott! 


Thank you! I think I was so concerned about the bighorn that was looking at me, I never noticed the hacked off leg. Now I will never unsee it :blink:  Lesson learned!


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3 years 8 months ago #691936 by garyrhook

Scott McKenzie wrote: Thank you! I think I was so concerned about the bighorn that was looking at me, I never noticed the hacked off leg. Now I will never unsee it :blink:  Lesson learned!


You will have to learn what works for you. I don't consider the back leg a problem, since you front ram is fully in the frame.

What bothers me the most are the flowers in the lower left. They stick out, to my eye.

Encourage you to start paying attention to background (i.e. what's happening around your subject, as well as what is behind your subject). Also, shoot with margin. You can always crop a bit in post, but the day you want to turn something into a wrap-around canvas print but don't have enough margin in your photo is the day you realize you could have zoomed out a bit. (Point of reference: a 4K frame is only 8+MP. Your camera captures more detail than you may require.)

+1 on more sky in the second shot. Horizons typically sit at the 1/3 or 1/2 point in the frame.


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3 years 8 months ago #691949 by Scott McKenzie

garyrhook wrote: You will have to learn what works for you. I don't consider the back leg a problem, since you front ram is fully in the frame.

What bothers me the most are the flowers in the lower left. They stick out, to my eye.

Encourage you to start paying attention to background (i.e. what's happening around your subject, as well as what is behind your subject). Also, shoot with margin. You can always crop a bit in post, but the day you want to turn something into a wrap-around canvas print but don't have enough margin in your photo is the day you realize you could have zoomed out a bit. (Point of reference: a 4K frame is only 8+MP. Your camera captures more detail than you may require.)

+1 on more sky in the second shot. Horizons typically sit at the 1/3 or 1/2 point in the frame.


Thanks very much for the feedback. After trying to correct some crooked horizons since taking that photo, I've definitely been more aware of the shooting with margin part. That is good advice. Agreed, even if there was as much sky as there is water in the foreground, it would be much better balanced. Thanks!


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3 years 8 months ago #691955 by Rob Cline
These are really good.  The first shot with the Rams is my favorite by far.  I would like to have seen a little more of the grass in the foreground.  I feel it's chopped off.  But still, love the shot, this one and #2 down.  


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3 years 8 months ago #691958 by Scott McKenzie

Rob Cline wrote: These are really good.  The first shot with the Rams is my favorite by far.  I would like to have seen a little more of the grass in the foreground.  I feel it's chopped off.  But still, love the shot, this one and #2 down.  


That makes sense, thank you!


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3 years 8 months ago #692013 by Prago
I was going to post similar comments to Rob, that top shot is such a winner.  I wish I could see more grass, that would make that shot a 9/10.  

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3 years 8 months ago #692019 by Scott McKenzie

Prago wrote: I was going to post similar comments to Rob, that top shot is such a winner.  I wish I could see more grass, that would make that shot a 9/10.  

Noted, and thank you! 


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