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11 years 3 weeks ago #114547 by Rob pix4u2
This one is from a trip to Colorado to go off roading in my Jeep. Taken with a Fuji finepix 3000 camera at 3 MP

next one is taken with film-Fuji Reala 100 Nikon N90s Nikon 80-200mm 2.8 data unrecorded

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114571 by The Time Capturer
I like the second one but I love the first one ... kinda looks like a histogram. Nice rich colours. Did you use any filters? (polarizer perhaps?)

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114592 by KCook
Both look a little dark on my wonky display. Really like the top one.

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114611 by Stealthy Ninja
I think there is some flare in the sky on the top one.

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114623 by robbie
The first one looks a little hazy but beautiful colors.The second one has a wide band from the top of the frame near the center[could be pressure mark?]The cloud on the top right corner pulls your eye out of the image.


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11 years 3 weeks ago #114624 by chasrich
Really nice colors. Mountains always gets me high... Dang it - now that tune is stuck in my head.

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114653 by Dori
The first one is beautiful!!!

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114658 by DestinDave
:agree:
With Kelly - both look a little dark to me.. a little selective lightening for detail maybe?
With Robbie - the top-right cloud needs cloned or cropped out
With Charles - he's got that damned song in my head now..
With everyone - the first one is beautiful..!
Looks like a great trip West, off-roading is always a blast..

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114752 by steveheap
I'm with the others - top one is much nicer, although I also think a bit lighter and a bit more contrast would help. A thought on the second - I know you can't go back and take it again, but there may be more on the original image. I think it would look better if the jeep was more to the left and the road tracked across the image from the bottom right to top left to leave your eye with the jeep on the horizon. It is too centered for my liking as it is.

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114823 by Rob pix4u2
Thanks Y'all for the critiques-I would love to go back to re-take the second one but I was as far to the right as I could get being on a shelf road and all but the next time i won't center the subject as much.

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11 years 3 weeks ago #114855 by photobod
RUBBISH :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: great work as always Rob, the bottom one looks dusty to me I can see lots of speckles over the sky ???

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