The Louvre pyramid

12 years 10 months ago - 12 years 10 months ago #81593 by abdullabintouq
My first attempt I guess to post here in this forum. Looking around for your critique and how can I improve. Enjoy folks!



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12 years 10 months ago #81603 by TheNissanMan
I love the image composition and the tones and the fact the fountain and the pyramid work perfectly together.

Would love to see a copy with the two water filters (guess thats what they are taken out) as although they do in no way ruin the image feel it maybe better still without them in the shot :)


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12 years 10 months ago - 12 years 10 months ago #81609 by MLKstudios
Some of the white areas look blown out, but other than that it's a beautiful shot.

BTW those hot spots don't look so bad on a screen, but will if/when you print it.

HTH,

Matthew :)

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12 years 10 months ago #82583 by John Landolfi
Agree with the abbove two posts. The building on the right could be straightened out a bit and would not be a distravtion. Lovely idea.:)


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12 years 10 months ago #88763 by abdullabintouq
Thanks guys for wisdom! :cheers:

I was initially trying to have 3 different type of aspect in one picture here. By having the fountain in foreground and the pyramid in the middle and with building in background.

Cheers,
Abdulla


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12 years 10 months ago #88959 by photobod
The blown out cloud top left is a big didtraction, the building does lean a little too much, could be straightened, I know its difficult but I would have a go at removing the people.
I do like it though its an image that grows on me the more I look at it.

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