Trying hard...new bride!

8 years 8 months ago #448556 by Georgian-Si-Valentina-Mihaila
No matter how good my photo looks, I think is always room for improvement! This is where I need you help, raw critique and advise. Thank you!


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8 years 8 months ago #448558 by stuartsbarbie
It is an interesting and unique pose.  She is a beautiful subject.  My only comment would be that the bouquet is one of the most important things to a bride and I would have tried someway to show it in focus.


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8 years 8 months ago #448560 by KCook
A fun pose, but I'm not digging the low key treatment.  Everything came out too dark.  Including the black background.  Nice model !!!

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
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8 years 8 months ago #448566 by Georgian-Si-Valentina-Mihaila
Thank you Kelly. I quickly lift up the shadows in LR. I like it better this way. Thanks again for  always great advice!


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8 years 8 months ago #448662 by Shadowfixer1
Very nice image. The only thing I see is it needs just a smidge more room above her right eye. I like the rest. I think the flowers being OOF is fine and looks better than if they were more in focus. Good job!!
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8 years 8 months ago #448680 by Georgian-Si-Valentina-Mihaila
Thank you for your advise. I've noticed that also. I need more practice with my 85mm, 1.4 manual lens even if I moved focus point in the upper right of the frame( on the eye). To get proper focus, I have to use live view magnified and I have hard time framing. I would shoot wider but in this case I have nothing to climb higher. Next time will be better! Best regards!

GM


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8 years 7 months ago #451587 by royhalpin
You nailed it


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8 years 7 months ago #452522 by Travel Nut
Very nice shot!


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