Modell portrait crituqe

7 years 2 weeks ago #522467 by kapka
Hi All,
I'd like to get some feedbacks about my portrait.
Thank you so much!


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7 years 2 weeks ago #522473 by Oscar Cohen
I like the tones, composition and the sharpness in her eyes.  Nice job.


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7 years 2 weeks ago #522479 by effron
Hard to miss with a pretty model, and I like everything here, except the near bokeh obscuring part of her....

Why so serious?
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7 years 2 weeks ago #522518 by KCook
Very nice. I find the low angle for the main light a little odd. Would like to see more with that light higher.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
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7 years 2 weeks ago #522535 by Shadowfixer1
I would crop the left side. It doesn't add anything to the image. The image is very warm toned which is fine if that is your choice but I would duplicate the layer, correct the white balance then paint her color corrected eyes back into the image.
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7 years 2 weeks ago #522556 by JaneK
I like!  


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7 years 2 weeks ago #522611 by Roman Omell
:thumbsup:   Overall, nice work here.  I do agree on shifting the crop as already mentioned. 


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7 years 1 day ago #524350 by Neillien
I'm actually a fan of the "bokeh" effect going on. Not too distracting, but gives the shot a little bit of depth. Nice shot! :thumbsup:


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6 years 11 months ago #525672 by Lavender Photo
I would up the exposure by maybe a half step and adjust the crop a bit, but otherwise this is a really pretty portrait!


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6 years 10 months ago #530504 by garyrhook

effron wrote: Hard to miss with a pretty model, and I like everything here, except the near bokeh obscuring part of her....


Turns out that's a "thing" now. Done well, I rather like it. Here it's okay.

Good job on the shot. I, too, like the eyes, but I would prefer a longer focal length.

I like the crop, being a fan of horizontal portraits. And negative space.


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6 years 10 months ago #530505 by garyrhook

effron wrote: Hard to miss with a pretty model, and I like everything here, except the near bokeh obscuring part of her....


Turns out that's a "thing" now. Done well, I rather like it. Here it's okay.

Good job on the shot. I, too, like the eyes, but I would prefer a longer focal length.

I like the crop, being a fan of horizontal portraits. And negative space.


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6 years 6 months ago #544334 by Kyle Johnson
Nice composition. I like it. 


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