New portrait shoot. What you guys think?

5 years 9 months ago #589318 by cwolfphoto
Hello everyone. This is a new portrait photo. What you guys think? What can I do to improve?



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5 years 9 months ago #589358 by Suni Park
Less dark in the background. 


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5 years 9 months ago #589362 by Suni Park
Same shot? Same advice. 


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5 years 9 months ago #589385 by sierracharlie338
I agree that background is a little too dark for my eye. 


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5 years 9 months ago #589432 by Jin Hyuk Kwon
But the expression in the subject's face is good. 


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5 years 9 months ago #589519 by Hannah Williams
Nice! A better lighting can help. 


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5 years 9 months ago #589571 by Kira Minori
The soft lighting is very cool! 


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5 years 9 months ago #589719 by Kyle Johnson
Better! 


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5 years 9 months ago #589740 by Lauren Grant
Very interesting shot. 


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5 years 9 months ago #589895 by garyrhook
Better. Good job. I like the light on his right cheek, and the catchlights (although... are they real?) In any event, I think you've created a mood. You could bring up the overall exposure, your choice. I'm still left with the impression you're desaturating some of the color, and would like to see this with no color manipulation. You'd get better skin tone that way. Or, pull the blue out of his skin. IMO.

Overall I like this better than the previous shots.


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5 years 9 months ago #589972 by Monica Martinez
Yeah! Well done! 


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5 years 9 months ago #591957 by Nikon Shooter
the DR is not there… looks almost SOOC!

Did you set the black and the white points?

Light is free… capturing it is not!
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5 years 9 months ago #592048 by Alyssa Briggs
Nice pointers! 


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