An interesting grab shot - the sort of thing that we all have taken over the years
I find the posts in the foreground a bit in the way - maybe next time you might be able to take a few steps to the right and shoot up & along the boardwalk itself ~ it would still give you the leading lines into the two people
I love the scene, but I agree with ozzie. At least about that one post that is intersecting her body. I think there should be some separation between the subject (the girl) and the posts lining the walk.