How is the edit ? what are the problems ? How would you edit it?

6 months 2 weeks ago #637908 by Oliver-
Hi,
i've edited this photo a couple of days ago and i'm a beginner in photo editing so, i want to know what did i do wrong and how can i improve the photo and the editing .
and how would you edit this photo ?
thanks :)

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1 month 2 weeks ago #657444 by devizeskayak
First, I wouldn't be adding extra bokeh to the photo - the posts to the left and right It looks unnatural to my eye and the band of sharpness in the original draws me in to your subject.

The colors are pushed a little hard too.

This is all my taste so take with a grain of salt.


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1 month 1 week ago #657789 by garyrhook
It's a bit too warm. He's orange-ish.

Don't turn your greens yellow.

For me: Please don't add fake blur. Ever. There's never a reason for it, and it never looks good (unless you intentionally make it obvious and an integral part of the image). If you need bokeh, get a better lens or learn to set up your shots for maximum effect.

You could use some vignetting here to darken the edges of the image.


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