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9 years 5 months ago #410934 by Italian_Dreamer
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An eye for an eye, LSD and antidepressants. Everything in balance. Buddhists call it karma and Christians call it the golden rule, Jews call it— I don't know. Rabbi Hillel said something poignant. Universe always settles the score.
Does it?
No, but it should.

House M.D


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9 years 5 months ago #410986 by garyrhook
I love the geometry here, and the fact that you have all of your lines perfectly straight, with perfect right angles. The crop is excellent, and I like the idea of the vignetting that focuses on the center point. An excellent subject, too.

What is less successful for me is the aperture. I'm not sure why you choose f/3.5, but that leaves pretty much all of the girders very soft. I would have gone with f/8 to f/11 and focused about halfway up. Look into the "hyperfocal distance" to understand more.

The processing is a bit dark; you could have more tonal range and more contrast. I see that you worked on darkening the sky but that left some haloing on the right. I would also suggest removing the 3 imperfections in the wires, but that's just me. More clouds to provide a soft / hard contrast would be ideal, maybe.

As always, for me.

A really great find, no matter what. Nicely seen.
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9 years 5 months ago #410993 by Italian_Dreamer
Thank you for the constructive critic Gary, I Agree To, The 3.5 is about the time of the day it was late, almost night and this shoot was one of my first Shoots of My DLSR Camera i bought and i was Learning about it, Yes i try to dark the sky but i think its impossible, i decided to create a radial filter to try to dark the outer border but with no success, i I choose to increase aperture the picture would be very dark, and not to good for editing :) i think would be very noisy :)

But Anyway Thank you for your wise Advice, i will keep that in Mind :)

An eye for an eye, LSD and antidepressants. Everything in balance. Buddhists call it karma and Christians call it the golden rule, Jews call it— I don't know. Rabbi Hillel said something poignant. Universe always settles the score.
Does it?
No, but it should.

House M.D


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9 years 5 months ago #411276 by Travel Nut
Very nice. Great detail.
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9 years 5 months ago #411345 by KCook

i think would be very noisy 

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For a picture in this style a little grain like noise would not hurt.

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9 years 5 months ago #411446 by Shadowfixer1
I like it. Good job.
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9 years 5 months ago #411972 by Simon Says
Beautiful for sure!
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9 years 1 month ago #431326 by paul
Fantastic symmetry in this!!

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9 years 1 month ago #431596 by tCampbell
Slightly dark, but so much going on in a good way here.  Love all the lines and angles.  This would look great in a flat black or brushed metal frame.  
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9 years 1 month ago #431612 by Italian_Dreamer

tCampbell wrote: Slightly dark, but so much going on in a good way here.  Love all the lines and angles.  This would look great in a flat black or brushed metal frame.  


yheap, I think you Right, I Will try that

An eye for an eye, LSD and antidepressants. Everything in balance. Buddhists call it karma and Christians call it the golden rule, Jews call it— I don't know. Rabbi Hillel said something poignant. Universe always settles the score.
Does it?
No, but it should.

House M.D


Daniel B.
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6 years 3 months ago #561914 by Aaron Rogers
Just a perfect 10! Wow! 
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6 years 3 months ago #562236 by Kira Minori
Nice perspective! 
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6 years 3 months ago #562572 by Suni Park
Wow! Nice concept! 
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6 years 3 months ago #562724 by Eshan Rachit
Good eye for beauty! 
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