The shadows were just crazy

9 years 9 months ago #391962 by DiDi-McPhillips
 This was taken in the rose garden at Thanksgiving Point in Utah.  The light was just right to get all the shadows.  CC welcome. 


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9 years 9 months ago #391972 by KCook
Neat!  Could be a good candidate for a monochrome treatment in post.  Or at least very faded colors.

Kelly

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9 years 9 months ago #391988 by DiDi-McPhillips
Kelly did you mean something like this? 

Muted colors



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9 years 9 months ago #391989 by DiDi-McPhillips
And here is the B&W



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9 years 9 months ago #392001 by JeremyS

DiDi-McPhillips wrote: And here is the B&W


Make that a bit more contrasty, and play with it a bit more and it will be a lot better.


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9 years 9 months ago - 9 years 9 months ago #392006 by GLiDeR
I really like the textures, shadows and lines in these photo's
It amazes me what we see when we slow down and observe things as a photographer does.

I think I prefer the color best  :)

Nice capture!


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9 years 9 months ago #392008 by KCook

DiDi-McPhillips wrote: Kelly did you mean something like this? 

Muted colors


Yes.  Of course we are getting into the area of personal taste, not absolutes.  But I think this faded version has a lot of charm.  I would be tempted to now crop a little of the bottom off.  A shot like this can be the basis of many nice variations, both for cropping and tonal treatments.  An exceptional capture you should be proud of.

Kelly

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9 years 9 months ago - 9 years 9 months ago #392025 by Stealthy Ninja
I think the faded colour one is boring as hell (personal opinion)

The black and white one is nice, but as Takennnn said, it needs more contrast.

Something like this:
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9 years 9 months ago #392034 by Uplander
I'm rather found of this one!


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9 years 9 months ago - 9 years 9 months ago #392056 by Scotty
Get your blacks to look like ink, and it'll take a life on of it's own.



I do not have access to your raw to duplicate. But play with the levels.

When the last candle has been blown out
and the last glass of champagne has been drunk
All that you are left with are the memories and the images-David Cooke.

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9 years 9 months ago #392116 by DiDi-McPhillips
Thank you to everyone for the feedback.  Here is one more edit in
B&W with much more contrast and a slightly different crop



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9 years 9 months ago #392117 by Shadowfixer1
A little bit over the top with the contrast I think. The original needed a little more contrast but not quite to this point.

DiDi-McPhillips wrote: Thank you to everyone for the feedback.  Here is one more edit in
B&W with much more contrast and a slightly different crop

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9 years 9 months ago #392475 by ubookoo
Love the color version. BW is great because of the shadows and angles but (to me) the color version adds the best of both worlds. Nice work!!


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9 years 9 months ago - 9 years 9 months ago #393551 by garyrhook
The color doesn't work (either version) because, despite the wonderful shadows and angles, the green (and the brown) distract the eye. Since they really serve no purpose in the image they need to go. That is best accomplished by making the image monochromatic.

As for "inky" blacks, detail is still needed. So don't push everything dark to black, nor everything light to white. Add contrast and use the entire range (black to white) but don't leave too much in the middle range.

IMO.


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9 years 9 months ago #393923 by NicoIa
I agree with garyrhook. I love the composition!


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