Abroad - Oversea

5 years 3 months ago - 5 years 3 months ago #626385 by SNPLC





















Make: WIKO
Model: CINK FIVE
ISO: 117
Aperture: f/2.4
Shutter speed: 1932/1000000 sec
Captured: Sat, 7 Apr 2018 11:14am









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5 years 3 months ago #626428 by KCook
It's not clear why you are sharing these.  On the chance that you want criticism, here is mine.  This one is the most successful -






Simple composition with the bird off-center just the right amount.  The rich tones in the sand and sea are also nice.

On the other hand we have -






This scene does have some interesting detail.  However the contrast is so low that the result is really dull.  Many of us here would not bother to share a shot like this.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
kellycook.zenfolio.com/

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5 years 3 months ago #626563 by SNPLC
Thank you twice for your criticisms, me just have posted for viewer to comment and with you these could be criticized so that's useful for my shooting...

My family had these photos shot on voyage on intention of souvenir with not much so careful selected details on scenes neither adjust after shooting so the results you've seen could not like those of professional photographers...

I would like to have what you say about these for better my photos next times

Wish you tell and see more...


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5 years 3 months ago #626566 by KCook
  • My family had these photos shot on voyage on intention of souvenir
That makes sense.  Sharing casual souvenirs is common on social sites like Facebook, etc.  Here at Photographytalk the main interest is quality photography.  Not really souvenirs.

Of course the other interest here is education.  When one of your shots that was important to did not turn out well, and you are not sure why, then feel free to post that photo and ask for comment.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
kellycook.zenfolio.com/

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5 years 3 months ago #626585 by SNPLC
I appreciated that ✌


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5 years 1 month ago #639547 by Rohan Tushar
I think the 6th shot is most successful of in terms of composition. It has to improve in colors though, but the pattern of the trees is creative. 


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5 years 1 month ago #639859 by Daryl Flores
The second shot has interesting lines but the point of horizon is so skewed. This can be easily fixed in cropping. 


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5 years 1 month ago #640139 by Kira Minori
The 3rd shot has interesting patterns aw well but it needs to enhanced in color and a little adjustment in WB to eliminate the blown highlights. 


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5 years 3 weeks ago #641297 by Suni Park
The last shot, the boat snap, I think is a potential shot> it is the most successful in terms of composition but details and should improve though. 


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5 years 2 weeks ago #642321 by Monica Martinez
The 6th shot is a good landscape. Colors have to be enhanced but it is a pretty good shot. 


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5 years 5 days ago #643575 by SNPLC
It will be improved next shot


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4 years 11 months ago #644326 by Alyssa Briggs
The last 2 shots are my favorite! The bird shot has a little bit of blown highlights and we can enhance the tonal range of the last shot. 


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4 years 11 months ago #644553 by SNPLC
Good comment!


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4 years 11 months ago #644881 by Lauren Grant

Alyssa Briggs wrote: The last 2 shots are my favorite! The bird shot has a little bit of blown highlights and we can enhance the tonal range of the last shot. 


Same! i like the bird photo the most. 


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4 years 7 months ago #661062 by Kelly Emery
The last 2 shots are really good. I think what needs to improve is the story-telling of the shots. 


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