Triple process lighthouse

1 year 6 months ago #546381 by effron
I'm not too good at these, had to do three exposures, sky, light and then a light painting of the grass. Messed with it, my son likes, my wife hates..(thinks all photoshop work is fake)...
This is it, comments welcome....up or down.

Make: NIKON CORPORATION
Model: NIKON D800
Lens: 16.0-35.0 mm f/4.0
ISO: 800
Aperture: f/13.0
Shutter speed: 1/45 sec
Captured: Thu, 20 Jul 2017 17:27pm

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1 year 6 months ago #546597 by garyrhook
I like your composition here, but I'd prefer to see the buildings and grass as they are in the dark. I think they're too bright but don't really add anything. I think they might work better if they are relegated to providing context. Or I could be wrong.


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1 year 6 months ago - 1 year 6 months ago #546607 by effron
You could be right too. After spending four hours here I was also disappointed the lighthouse was out of order. I toned the grass down quite a lot, kind of overdid the light painting....Still messing with it....

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1 year 5 months ago #547488 by Rohan Tushar
This is a good shot. i also like the composition but there is something that makes me uncomfortable watching it. I just can't figure it out yet. I will comment it if I found it. 


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1 year 5 months ago #547590 by effron
Thanks Rohan, I probably over did the light painting of the grass, I just can't seem to get it right....

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1 year 5 months ago #547713 by Adam Wilson
It's fine. This is still a god shot. You will definitely make a better one. 


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1 year 5 months ago #547729 by effron
Thanks Adam....

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1 year 5 months ago #547752 by Hannah Williams
:agree:  definitely.


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1 year 5 months ago #547759 by effron
Thanks Hannah!

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1 year 5 months ago #547970 by Carl Mendez
But this is not bad at all. Good job! 


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1 year 5 months ago #548232 by effron
Thank you Carl!

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1 year 5 months ago #548304 by Jin Hyuk Kwon
:agree:


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1 year 5 months ago #548340 by effron
Thanks Jin!

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1 year 5 months ago #548625 by Monica Martinez
Nice stars!


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1 year 5 months ago #548909 by Breanna Ellington
Stil, this is a decent shot. I like it.  


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