The Austin Skyline -- CC welcome

8 years 10 months ago #445535 by garyrhook
Captured this last night. Constructed from 2 shots and some processing.

Oh, yeah. I forgot we can't insert from an album right now. *sigh*. And I just found another bug....

Here:



Photo Comments
Attachments:
,
8 years 10 months ago #445541 by tganiats
I don't have a lot of critique here...looks like you did a good job (again). The sky is so dramatic, but you have preserved the shadow detail well, and I think that helps to balance the photo. Nice work.


,
8 years 10 months ago - 8 years 10 months ago #445567 by Hassner
I think you must have been thinking "cc welcome, but crit that if you can!"

What a sky! Thank you for not putting the horison in the middle like I see people do with reflections all the time.

But you challenged me and I WILL find something to crit.
I think i would have put the bulk of the buildings more off centre, by moving one more building to the right. :whistle:


This person is a posting maniac and deserves a #1 badge!Top Poster
No one kicks up there feet next to the water cooler better than this person.  Top poster - LoungeLounge Guru
Photo Comments
,
8 years 10 months ago #445584 by garyrhook

Hassner wrote: I think i would have put the bulk of the buildings more off centre, by moving one more building to the right. :whistle:


Thank you (and tganiats) for your kind words.

The skyline is the skyline, unfortunately. :S The challenge here is balancing my position, the buildings, and the sunset (which was almost directly left in this shot). This is actually not even close to what I was intending But it is what it is, right?

Glad you like the shot.


Photo Comments
,
8 years 10 months ago #445612 by JaneK
I have no criticism to share other than this is a very beautiful shot. I love the colors, the sharp silhouette of the city skyline, the reflection and over all composition and how it all comes together.


Photo Comments
,
8 years 10 months ago #445619 by Don Fischer
Nice shot. I notice nobody had much to say about the water or the reflection! For me I'd like to see the horizon lowered, and even more sky. I just scrolled down enough to see what a different crop might look like. got to what looks like say a 10x20 starting at the top of the sky and getting rid of a lot of the water. I like it better that way. Bottom line is though, really nice shot just as it is.


,
8 years 10 months ago #445627 by stuartsbarbie
OK Gary, so I stared at this picture for a few minutes trying to find something to CC about it. I don't think I am qualified enough to say much except I really like it. It seems to be a very smooth blending of two shots.

Just for S&G's I wouldn't mind seeing both shots.

Great sky btw.


Photo Comments
,
8 years 10 months ago #445664 by KCook
Reminds me of the lake near a hotel I stayed at in Austin. Very nice color, I would like to see it aimed to the left a little more.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
kellycook.zenfolio.com/

,
8 years 10 months ago #445706 by garyrhook
Thanks all!

Don: I love the sky, too, but there's no other foreground interest other than the reflection. That would make for a less interesting image, IMO. You'll note that the current composition falls into the rule of thirds, both horizontally and vertically. Yes, a more panoramic crop would be fine, too, but I need to look at the image in this ratio, or even 4x5 or 5x6.

Kelly: Nope. There are cranes just to the left; I didn't want to include them. And this pretty much encompasses all of the tall buildings in central Austin, anyway. And I would never put them dead center.

Barbara: Sure thing. Here are the originals, one for the sky, the other a bit later for the buildings. These are not SOOC; they've been through LR but not PS. After doing some plug-in work on both, I ended up using the sky from the second in overlay mode in PS and adjusting for the effect I wanted. I'm pretty happy with the result.



Photo Comments
Attachments:
,
8 years 10 months ago #445746 by stuartsbarbie
Thanks for posting both shots. Now having seen them I have to say WOW nice edit job!


Photo Comments
The following user(s) said Thank You: garyrhook
,
8 years 10 months ago #445791 by Travel Nut
Both good ones...I like #2 though....


,
8 years 10 months ago #446623 by Simon Says
I prefer the first.


,
8 years 10 months ago #446648 by JeremyS
I think it is a good shot, I'd have like to have seen another shot with the water being even smoother. Possibly a heavy ND filter to get the waves/water to be much smoother, it could make the symmetry between the actual buildings and reflections that much stronger. 


,
8 years 10 months ago #446655 by Richard Taylor
You know you have a winner, this one works in every possible way for me.  The fiery sky, reflection and silhouette action is taking the eye in all the right directions.  

:thumbsup:


Photo Comments
The following user(s) said Thank You: garyrhook
,
8 years 10 months ago #446705 by garyrhook

Takennnn wrote: I think it is a good shot, I'd have like to have seen another shot with the water being even smoother. Possibly a heavy ND filter to get the waves/water to be much smoother, it could make the symmetry between the actual buildings and reflections that much stronger. 


Thanks. Unfortunately, with the ripples by the far shore (and thus most of the movement of the water), I would never have gotten an even texture top to bottom, no matter how long an exposure. Wasn't worth trying. I rather like the reality of the water here, and (IMO) helps to place the viewer in the scene.

It's really never not breezy or windy here :-( I need to go north to find still water. Or on a day where the water is really in motion.


Photo Comments
,

Latest Landscape Photography Tips

817.3K

241K

  • Facebook

    817,251 / Likes

  • Twitter

    241,000 / Followers

  • Google+

    1,620,816 / Followers

Latest Reviews

The Olympus Pen E-P7 is an affordable micro four thirds mirrorless camera with 4K video capabilities, a 20.3MP sensor, and 121 focus points, making it a solid entry-level camera for beginners.

May 13, 2024

The Panasonic G9 II is a 25.2-megapixel micro four thirds camera with numerous features that make it punch out of its weight class, like 779 AF points, 5.8K video, and weather sealing.

May 10, 2024

The Fujifilm XT5 is a 40MP mirrorless camera capable of 6.2K video at 30p. With those specs, it’s an ideal choice for photographers needing a camera to pull double duty for imaging and video.

Apr 25, 2024

The Canon EOS R100 is an entry-level mirrorless camera introduced in 2023. But just because it’s an entry-level camera doesn’t mean it’s a bare-bones camera. Find out why in this review!

Apr 22, 2024

Forum Top Posters

Latest Articles

Upgrade your kit in 2024 with the best intermediate camera on the market! The question is, what camera fits the bill? We’ve got three top options for you to choose from in this buyer’s guide.

May 15, 2024

The best photography jobs right now are a mix of tried-and-true gigs like wedding photography and new jobs highlighting AI’s capabilities, travel, and videography.

May 15, 2024

The Olympus Pen E-P7 is an affordable micro four thirds mirrorless camera with 4K video capabilities, a 20.3MP sensor, and 121 focus points, making it a solid entry-level camera for beginners.

May 13, 2024

Starting a photography business is one thing; sustaining your business over a long period of time is another. Use the tips in this professional photography guide to build something with longevity!

May 13, 2024

The Panasonic G9 II is a 25.2-megapixel micro four thirds camera with numerous features that make it punch out of its weight class, like 779 AF points, 5.8K video, and weather sealing.

May 10, 2024

Cinematic photography is an interesting genre that combines photographic and videographic skills along with effective storytelling techniques. The result? Highly impactful images!

May 09, 2024

Newborn photography requires skill, the right gear, and a lot of patience. This beginner’s guide discusses critical topics that will help you be more prepared for before, during, and after the shoot.

May 08, 2024

To fill the frame means to expand the footprint of the subject in your shot. Get in close, zoom in, crop the image, or use other techniques to bring the subject to the forefront.

May 06, 2024