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1 year 8 months ago #742258 by BenjaminSPetrofsky
A couple of black and white images I’d like reviews on.

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1 year 8 months ago #742269 by Shadowfixer1
I like 2, 3 and 4. The first and last is just too jarring for my taste. If the person was in a different position that could be nice. That's just my opinion though and you know what they day about those.
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1 year 8 months ago #742270 by BenjaminSPetrofsky
It was kind of the point to make it uncomfortable, that is my style sometimes
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1 year 7 months ago #742370 by Monica Martinez
Nice set. I like the contrast of the second shot.

Please leave a space every after photo. 
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1 year 7 months ago #742396 by BenjaminSPetrofsky
I was afraid the writing on the chalkboard looked weird. Is there a way to fix that?
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1 year 7 months ago #742433 by Jack Mason
I think you can still edit it. But it's no big deal. There's is always a next time. Well done for this set. Nicely rendered. I like the look of the man in the portrait. So mysterious. 
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1 year 7 months ago #742551 by Alyssa Briggs
Nice perspective in the set. Well-rendered. 
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1 year 7 months ago #743214 by Bobby Mitchell
This is a good set. Well done for the render. 
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1 year 6 months ago #744190 by RIPbiker13
I loved the first one. Takes me back in time. Looks like film the way it was shot.

Two was a little dark. The window was going to be over exposed no matter what you did unless you masked it in post, so I'd lighten the room some.

The third lacked interest for me, but was well composed I think. 

I liked the almost-sepia tone fourth. The subject was cool but the ceiling made the cart blend in some. 

Only critiquing because you asked. I find photos like this far more interesting than color in most scenarios. Something about them I can't explain. I need to shoot more B&W. You took the mundane and displayed it to be something extraordinary. 
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1 year 6 months ago #744531 by BenjaminSPetrofsky

RIPbiker13 wrote: I loved the first one. Takes me back in time. Looks like film the way it was shot.

Two was a little dark. The window was going to be over exposed no matter what you did unless you masked it in post, so I'd lighten the room some.

The third lacked interest for me, but was well composed I think. 

I liked the almost-sepia tone fourth. The subject was cool but the ceiling made the cart blend in some. 

Only critiquing because you asked. I find photos like this far more interesting than color in most scenarios. Something about them I can't explain. I need to shoot more B&W. You took the mundane and displayed it to be something extraordinary. 


first photo: Thanks!

second: the window was meant to be over exposed

third photo: it’s supposed to be minimalistic and uncomfortablr

fourth photo: the ceiling and the trains are meant to “suck you in” to the subject.
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1 year 6 months ago #744542 by RIPbiker13

BenjaminSPetrofsky wrote: first photo: Thanks!

second: the window was meant to be over exposed

third photo: it’s supposed to be minimalistic and uncomfortablr

fourth photo: the ceiling and the trains are meant to “suck you in” to the subject.

Then perfect. I still like the photos. I'm learning as I go and I find learning from others a great way to expand. For that, thank you for sharing these and the explanation of them helps me as well. 
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1 year 6 months ago #744552 by Andrew AG
Second one down has some creep and mystery to it.  This one is my favorite and I believe tells the best story out of your shots.  
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