First time asking for critique

12 years 8 months ago - 12 years 7 months ago #131679 by photogram
This is my first submission for critique on any of my photos. I especially like this one..what do you think?? I'm new but I want to learn from my mistakes!



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12 years 8 months ago #131683 by VT Hiker
Not bad.

I might like to see more detail in and more emphasis on the clouds. You did let the foreground objects go into silhouette instead of trying to get some light on them, which gives a better result.


What else do ya have? :)

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12 years 8 months ago #131690 by photogram
I have more in my gallery


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12 years 8 months ago #131691 by Dori
Very well done! :judge:

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12 years 8 months ago #131775 by TheNissanMan
As an image I like it and love the silouhette with the shade on the boats windscreen, would like to have seen the whole boat in it to be picky :)


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12 years 8 months ago #131812 by chasrich
I like it... what happened to the shot taken five minutes after this one? Just kidding... :judge: :thumbsup: :goodpost:

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12 years 7 months ago #132453 by redneckphotos
:judge: I loved it very soothing feel to the scene

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12 years 7 months ago #132554 by PaulTully
Very nice lighting B)
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12 years 7 months ago #132570 by Nikonjan
I like it. I'm thinking instead of centering the horizon you might need either more foreground or less sky.

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12 years 7 months ago #132938 by Joiemagic
:welcomeclan Very nice, but yeah, I would like to see some more detail in the clouds... Is this corrected in any way or fresh out of the camera?

And again, :welcomeclan :cheers:

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12 years 7 months ago #132949 by Joiemagic
Checked your gallery... You got some very nice shots there... :thumbsup:

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12 years 7 months ago #132959 by Stealthy Ninja
IMHO a little too much blue for a sunset scene.
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12 years 7 months ago #133223 by Shanna-Marie
I think it's gorgeous, wish I was sitting right there looking out onto that scene. Nicely done! :)

I believe that there is an explanation for everything, so, yes, I believe in miracles. ~Robert Brault

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12 years 7 months ago #134372 by John37
I can picture myself getting into one of those boats and going for a sunset cruise. My only CC is as others have mentioned, more 'cloud vibrance'.
Nice shot though.... it puts me in the scene.

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12 years 7 months ago #134373 by John37
I take back what I said above. The more I think about it, the photo is perfect! Emphasis on the clouds would do just that... put emphasis on the clouds, not even knowing if that was your intent. The picture sets a mood, a scene that I can participate in vicariously though the shot.
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