What do you think?

12 years 4 months ago - 12 years 4 months ago #178668 by froggy5420
Newbie will take all thoughts on this photo.


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12 years 4 months ago #178670 by froggy5420
I put this post in the wrong area....How do I fix it??? Thanks


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12 years 4 months ago #178675 by Screamin Scott
I moved it into the "General Photography" for display or critique section for you...

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12 years 4 months ago #178678 by froggy5420
Thank you! That is where I intended to put it...


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12 years 4 months ago #178679 by john_m
I like it alot and has alot of potential. I really like the mood in the photo, the "whats on the other side of the window" felling. The only thing that bothers me is you missed the corner of the windown and the wall appears to be leaning (from the angle you shot it at). I really think you did the photo justice with the BW conversion aslo. Great job :judge:

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12 years 4 months ago #178683 by rmeyer7

john_m wrote: I like it alot and has alot of potential. I really like the mood in the photo, the "whats on the other side of the window" felling. The only thing that bothers me is you missed the corner of the windown and the wall appears to be leaning (from the angle you shot it at). I really think you did the photo justice with the BW conversion aslo. Great job :judge:

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Exactly what I was going to say :)


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12 years 4 months ago #178687 by Dori
Well done, I really like the mood of this one!! :judge:

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12 years 4 months ago #178719 by Barry_Johnston
Composition is an obscure thing. What I try to remember when composing an image, is that the eye always wants to go from left to right; this is because it is the way we read, and it seems more natural to us. So in your image, the blank wall is leading my eye from right to left which seems unnatural... perhaps flipping the pic may help, and even straightening a little may help a little... to me the image is fine, other than the composition, but there are a million things we can do...

I hope that helps...

Barry

Barry Johnston
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12 years 4 months ago #179035 by froggy5420
Thank you! Also nice to hear others opinions to take into consideration for the next time.


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12 years 4 months ago #179037 by butterflygirl921

john_m wrote: I like it alot and has alot of potential. I really like the mood in the photo, the "whats on the other side of the window" felling. The only thing that bothers me is you missed the corner of the windown and the wall appears to be leaning (from the angle you shot it at). I really think you did the photo justice with the BW conversion aslo. Great job :judge:



:agree: :agree: But i do like the idea and the mood you set for the photo :thumbsup: :judge:


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