For C & C - Monte San Savino

10 years 1 month ago #361227 by Tuscan Muse
As many of you know, I am learning about post processing and I am enjoying experimenting.  What do you think of this?
Thanks for viewing! ( This is not to be confused with the expertise provided by our splendid Instructors at Tuscan Muse. I am just the host, who happens to love photography.)

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10 years 1 month ago - 10 years 1 month ago #361493 by garyrhook
Good start.

I like: the composition, the alcove/stairs/walls/color, and your choice of including the arch in the upper right. The light is nicely dispersed as well.

The PP is pretty good. I like the details that you've exposed in the shadows, and the colors mostly remain natural. I do think the HDR-ness could be dialed back a bit; it comes across as overcooked to my eye. You're on the right track just pull back. I often find that applying an effect until it's obvious, then reducing it, can result in a more satisfying product. $0.02.

The thing that needs the most work are the highlights on the upper back wall/corner. They need taming as they attract the eye, but there's nothing there to look at. The wall should be no brighter than the area on the left around the window, if you can control it enough.

Finally: framing. I would have stepped back to get both potted plants fully into the shot, and to alleviate lens warp (which I don't care for here).  But I'm guessing that you had no room to do so :-) which I get.

So, for me: :thumbsup:  I like it.


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10 years 1 month ago #362039 by Tristan R
I love the shot, if I had any criticism to add, I would just say to pull back on the contrast just a little bit.  


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10 years 1 month ago #362047 by DSRay
:thumbsup:

I love this and would pretty much echo garyrhook's comments.


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10 years 1 month ago #362079 by Tuscan Muse
Gary you are right- I couldn't step back any further.  Thank you all for taking the time to comment. It's great to have the wisdom of experience to turn to in these forums.  I posted this on a Google+ photography community and it is in the running for photo of the month, much to my surprise!
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10 years 1 month ago #362325 by John Landolfi
Very Nice, Linda!
All intelligent comments have been made, so I'll just reiterate to use HDR when necessary, but not broadcast you have done so.:)


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10 years 1 month ago #363699 by Alex
Linda, bags are packed and I'm ready to go!  Seriously... looking at photos like this makes me want to jump on a plane to soak in the culture and architecture of places like this!  Thanks for sharing.

Thank you for making PhotographyTalk.com your photography community of choice.
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10 years 1 month ago #364839 by Overread
Pull back on the brightness for me, other than that, great shot


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10 years 1 month ago #364865 by Kim Chui
Nice shot. Love the place. Just work on your contrast a bit. 


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10 years 3 weeks ago - 10 years 3 weeks ago #367341 by Nathaniel Witmer
work on your contrast and step back a bit for better framing.


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10 years 3 weeks ago #367389 by KCook
If this is HDR, put that away and start the post over from scratch.  The tones for a scene such as this should not need any HDR.

Kelly Cook

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
kellycook.zenfolio.com/

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10 years 2 weeks ago #368613 by Chris Lee
nice tone. step back a bit.


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