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12 years 3 months ago - 12 years 3 months ago #202122 by jagger
Just starting portrait taking please critque. Thank you


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12 years 3 months ago #202133 by Darrell
I would say cropped to close, She looks all scrunched up....

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12 years 3 months ago #202149 by Rob pix4u2
Hair looks flyaway

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12 years 3 months ago #202151 by jagger
Thanks


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12 years 3 months ago #202348 by proverbs3photos
looks like awkward posing in the shot... looks kind of like a floating limb in the front... I dont remember the exact name of it but ADORAMA TV has some really good videos you can watch and there was one about cropping your portraits and the do's and dont's of cropping certain areas. Highly suggest you check it out! It's helped me lots! :)


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12 years 3 months ago - 12 years 3 months ago #202369 by boriqua latina
Cutting off below the limb not flattering, the left eye looks vacant, hair flyways not good! I wanna see more portraits .. Keep striving u got the passion!


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12 years 3 months ago #202370 by Logic 7
Lighting looks good but a better pose would help. Hands folded on the knee would be ok. It looks like she is an amputee. Brush the hair back off her left eye.


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12 years 3 months ago #202374 by Stealthy Ninja
High up wide angle = weird head.

Also what's she doing with her hands?

Feel like I want to see more of the person.
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