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12 years 9 months ago #114887 by anketmohanty
need to improve plz help





Anket Mohanty
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12 years 9 months ago - 12 years 9 months ago #114889 by eryck
I will try to critique Im new here and still learning so dont take my word its just one opinion

I will start with the 3rd one, best for last, it looks very artistic, the concrete background almost looks like canvas and the butterfly body and legs are sharp enough, and it looks like you darkened the wings and I think thats fine for this image

the first one is very moody and I like the vignette but its a bit wide and theres lots of space in the image that i consider lost, I would consider cropping it so the bird and grass are tighter in the frame.

the second one is not very appealling to me, although I appreciate flower pics in my opinion the rocks are too blown out.

keep it up, your profile image is cool I love mountains.
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12 years 9 months ago - 12 years 9 months ago #114897 by Dori
I like the silhouette look of the last one.
The second one just doesn't work for me. A bit cluttered. Maybe fill the frame with the flower next time?
Now, the first one? It rocks! I like the use of negative space and the treatment. The only thing I would personally do is clone out the other bird(?).

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12 years 9 months ago #114918 by Shadowfixer1
Go read the rule of thirds thread. It may help.

Number one - nice concept but needs a tighter crop and then add the effects.

Number two - A snapshot. Decide on the subject and concentrate on it. The flower is very nice so shoot the flower, not all the other junk around it. Simple images work, clutter doesn't.

Number three - Too centered. The butterflly should be on the lower right power point. Good butterfly images in black and white are very rare and hard to find one that works. Detail and sharpness is good.

These are just my opinions. Your opinion is what matters. Keep shooting and have fun.
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12 years 9 months ago #114941 by anketmohanty
thk u for ur advice u r right the first image can be cropped a little more.........
the flower image i was actually trying to show case the color and natural B&W contrast.....but i guess it became a little cluttered............

Anket Mohanty
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12 years 9 months ago #114943 by anketmohanty
and yes even i love the mountains love to camp out ...............and ride the hill terrains.......

Anket Mohanty
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12 years 9 months ago #115025 by Baydream

anketmohanty wrote: thk u for ur advice u r right the first image can be cropped a little more.........
the flower image i was actually trying to show case the color and natural B&W contrast.....but i guess it became a little cluttered............

Glad the critiques were helpful. That is the best way to learn. By the way, it looks like the second is a bit overexposed (just a bit).

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12 years 9 months ago #115065 by chasrich
:judge: I like both the photos and the comments that followed. :goodpost:

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12 years 9 months ago - 12 years 9 months ago #115121 by The Time Capturer
First of all, I'm not a fan of b&w or borders but I won't let that influence my opinions here.

Image #1

I like the concept here. I agree with the others about a tighter crop. Personally, I would crop it so the bird is closer to the upper right or upper left and also, cloning out the second bird is a good idea, as mentioned.

Image #2

I understand the problem with clutter. Clutter is a personal enemy of mine, but, in this image, I really don't think it's that bad. I love the contrasting colours ... new life in a dismal environment is the impression I get from this. Also, I get a feel of freedom because the flower is outside the pot (athough I know it's a vine - morning glory, I believe). I would crop out a little of the top and the left, enough to still show the pot, as you intended, but will move the flower away from the center of the image and it will be more prominent. I agree that it appears a little overexposed as well.

Image #3

The jury is still out on this one. I like it, there's no doubt about that. It has kind of a sinister feel to it like the butterfly is the arch-nemesis to the garden. However, I'm thinking it might be a little too dark. Maybe just a slight amount of wing detail would add to this image.

All in all, great images and a great effort. :thumbsup:

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12 years 9 months ago #115187 by Rob pix4u2
Image one - I agree that a tighter crop would hlp but the you would need to include more of the foliage from the lower left corner to balance the pic for the rule of thirds

Image two - concentrate on getting close to your subject and ridding the frame of distracting elements as well as filling the frame with the flower

Image three - I agree with John that a little more wing detail would be helpful, otherwise a very good capture for the details already there

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