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12 years 3 months ago - 12 years 3 months ago #187612 by chutchinson




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12 years 3 months ago #187618 by pottsy62
I like the rustic look of 2 & 3 but i think No. 1 should focus on either the wall OR the overalls. Try to lead the viewer around the photo visually. I do like the way you've done the tap photo.

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12 years 3 months ago #187650 by photobod
Good efforts although 2 and 3 look like the same photo to me, the last one would be better if it had a bit more exposure, maybe use curves in photoshop to just give it a little lift, well done and keep posting. :judge: :judge: :judge:

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12 years 3 months ago #187679 by ADMerrick
Having a guy who works in a steel mill, I like the first one but maybe just a little more of the overalls in the photo would be helpful. I also like the second photo versus the third. Something about the focus. Just my 2 cents.


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12 years 3 months ago #187741 by Baydream
I like the 2nd/3rd shots (I know they are the same). I others are a bit underexposed on my monitor. I would bring them up a bit to see a few more details.


FYI - I edited your post to enlarge the last shot. Baydream

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12 years 3 months ago #187839 by Dori
The 2/3 shots tell a story of ruggedness and wear. :judge: :judge: :judge:

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12 years 3 months ago #187847 by Gary Trent photography
I really like the rusty wrench & chain .... great idea !
I find the composition (or should I say no composition)
leads my eye right out of the picture.
Maybe place in a different arrangement so the eye
stays within the frame.
Good exposure btw.

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