Some New Shots Please give me some critics 4

12 years 3 months ago #191498 by my_wave










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12 years 3 months ago #191518 by Scott Grant
#1 and #2 are my favorites, last one would have been nice to get more distinctive lines of the people in front of the camera man


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12 years 3 months ago #191548 by my_wave
can you explain a bit more in detail about the last picture that you said i would try to implement it :)


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12 years 3 months ago #191586 by chasrich
:judge: :thumbsup: :woohoo:

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12 years 3 months ago #191623 by Dori
The first 2 are well done! :judge: :judge:

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12 years 3 months ago #191659 by john_m
I like the last one, but would have like to see a little more seperation between the 2 people. Good job none the less!

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12 years 3 months ago #191664 by Baydream

john_m wrote: I like the last one, but would have like to see a little more seperation between the 2 people. Good job none the less!

:agree: I think that is what Scott was talking about.

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12 years 3 months ago #191669 by my_wave
those two people were just 2 steps far away from each other and on steps due to the uneven layer they seem too close how should i adjust this thing can anyone help me?


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12 years 3 months ago #191671 by john_m
I would try to reshoot it, but this time maybe have them holding hands side by side. You would have to play with it. Have them do several different poses and then process the one(s) you loke the best.

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12 years 3 months ago #191787 by Provo
# 2 and #3 are my choices

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