Working on Composition. Suggestions Please!!

12 years 7 months ago #142801 by J. Hansen






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I am trying to work on my composition to hopefully cut down on the amount of cropping I have to do. I like what I have but I know it can always be improved. Any suggestions/ideas would be appreciated. This old truck is just across the street so I can pop over to try out any suggestions!Thanks for looking!!


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12 years 7 months ago #142872 by Wood
I like the first and 2nd pictures. The 3rd one is a little too crop in. The 4th one looks good as portrait.

The 3rd and 4th pictures are about the same crop, but 4th pic is portrait and at a different angle so it adds something more the picture.


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12 years 7 months ago - 12 years 7 months ago #142876 by Baydream
I would love to see just a bit more "greenery to the left and top to get ol' Bessy off dead center. I just think it might look less static (although it "aint goin' anywhere". :P
The extra space gives a sense of "place".

I always try to leave just a bit of extra space around my subject for composition and different print sizes.

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12 years 7 months ago #142889 by Wood
These goes along with what Baydream said, ..
You see how you have space on the right side of the truck. Well move that space to left side and it will give a sense of the truck going somewhere....the direction, the future.

Composition is partly about showingly where the subject came from and where it's going. With this subject, it's would probably be better to show where the truck is going.


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12 years 7 months ago #142919 by KCook
For me the 4th one (vertical format) is the best. With that one I would also try shooting from spots nearer the truck, zooming wider to maintain the same scene width as the original. May as well make these color, you can always PP to mono tone later.

Kelly Cook

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12 years 7 months ago #142949 by J. Hansen




The first one is the color version of the 4th picture B&W. The second one is the original of the 1st picture, Should I just leave it be or maybe just crop a little off the bottom???? :unsure:
Thanks to all who have commented so far! I am off with recharged batteries to go try some more shots. Will check back!!


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12 years 7 months ago #142953 by KCook
No need to crop out the bright grass at the bottom. That can be fixed in PP.

Kelly

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12 years 7 months ago #143058 by icepics
I like the color better for this because it shows the two-tone of the paint and rust. This is a nice subject the way it's nestled in the bushes and branches. I think I actually like the original horizontal better than the crop except for the rear wheel rim or something that shows to the lower right, that seems to be more distracting than adding anything to the photo because you can't really tell what it is.

I notice there's some light reflected in the windshield to the right; you might try moving around a bit and changing your vantage point to see how else you might catch light in the windshield - it might be different w/how sunny/cloudy it is and the time of day.

Sharon
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12 years 7 months ago #143078 by JBPhoto
I guess none of the shots are wrong.
In my opinion I like the second image, the fourth image appears 2-dimensional, the angle with the fourth giving more depth.
I know this is about composition however I too notice reflection coming from windscreen and front of chrome fittings, waiting for overcast/couldy conditions could fix this it may also allow for deeper/richer colours.B)


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12 years 7 months ago - 12 years 7 months ago #143161 by Baydream

JBPhoto wrote: I guess none of the shots are wrong.
In my opinion I like the second image, the fourth image appears 2-dimensional, the angle with the fourth giving more depth.
I know this is about composition however I too notice reflection coming from windscreen and front of chrome fittings, waiting for overcast/couldy conditions could fix this it may also allow for deeper/richer colours.B)

Perhaps a polarizing filter could cut the reflection and still allow use of the brighter sunshine.
You are right. As Dewill Jones says, "There is more than on right answer".

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12 years 7 months ago - 12 years 7 months ago #143169 by MLKstudios
I'll agree with Dewitt here. I like the window reflection. It looks natural to me.

However, I don't think the view (or as you call it the composition) grabs the subject as well as it could be grabbed.

Think about IT. What makes it, that rusty car, special -- is it the chrome, the medallion, the rust, or something else?

Find "it" in your eye and then bring that home with you in your camera. Then we can all share the importance of how this rusty old car connects to all of us.

:)

SN, that's the art part. Beyond what is pretty. Its essence.

"I see faces and traces of home..."

-- Peter Gabriel, The Lamb Lies Down

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12 years 7 months ago #143341 by J. Hansen






Went back, tried again. Don't know what to think. I have to say I like the last one that is kinda in your face cause they were the work horses of their day and it makes it look tough, even with all the rust. Weird I know! :lol: Thank you for all the suggestions!! Will try on an overcast day when we get one.


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12 years 7 months ago #143342 by MLKstudios
I like the "in-your-face" version too. Again, think about what parts of the subject have the most visual impact, and highlight them using your composition.

:)

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12 years 7 months ago #143351 by KCook
Top one: needs a lot tighter crop (and square format).

Middle one: can't win 'em all

Bottom one: back up a bit for wider scene (not a lot!), also position camera higher so top of hood can be seen

In all of these the sky reflection in the windshield is not helping. Tough to deal with, unless you wait for different weather or a different time of day.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
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12 years 7 months ago #143459 by J. Hansen


Kelly, I cropped the picture more. Better or is it to much now?? Can not do anything about the glare until we have a more overcaste day. May get lucky tomorrow cause it is supposed to rain. Will see if I can get more of the top of the hood without loosing to much of the grill. BTW my husband thinks I'm nuts cause I keep running across the street to take pictures of the same thing over and over!! :lol:


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