LandScape: For critique

12 years 7 months ago #150956 by manish1669
I am a nee bee out here. Here is my pic (Sun set clouds) for the critique review.
The picture has been post processed for the exposure level

-MKT
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12 years 7 months ago #150978 by Zafonia
you really have to serch for the river and land because your eye is attracted to the bright sky... If you could bring the river out more it would be more pleasing.
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12 years 7 months ago #151223 by rmeyer7
:agree:
Your sky and clouds are beautiful. If you could bring out more of the shadow and land this photo would go from good to great!


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12 years 7 months ago #151298 by manish1669
Thanx Zafonia.. i was actually stuck with the clouds .. wil keep in mind

-MKT
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12 years 7 months ago #151306 by butterflygirl921
i would brighten it up just a tad. the clouds are beautiful and gorgeous but you do lose the river.


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12 years 7 months ago - 12 years 7 months ago #151323 by manish1669
Ok .. here is another picture .. i hope it has the expected composition :)
Again the picture was under exposed increased the shadow and tweaked the temperature a bit

-MKT
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12 years 7 months ago #151328 by rmeyer7
:thumbsup: Definitely easier to see the water and the land. I like the comp of the first image a bit more, but the exposure is better on the second. There's not much detail in the land, but I like the silhouetted look of it anyway.


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12 years 7 months ago #151330 by LauraD
I think the second one looks fantastic ...Really well balanced and I like the the silhouette of the mountains ! :judge:

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12 years 7 months ago #151339 by chasrich
I would love to see the top half of number 1 cloned onto the bottom of number 2...

I guess I'm saying I like both shots... :judge: :thumbsup:

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12 years 7 months ago #151340 by photobod

chasrich wrote: I would love to see the top half of number 1 cloned onto the bottom of number 2...

I guess I'm saying I like both shots... :judge: :thumbsup:


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12 years 7 months ago - 12 years 7 months ago #151358 by Baydream
Even a little tweak to the original would help.
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Hope you don't mind. Just wanted to see what a quick fix would do.

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