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10 years 7 months ago #300107 by prestoncornutt
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10 years 7 months ago #300129 by KCook
The exposure is quite nice. I would like to see a teensy bit more contrast. :thumbsup:

For composition, I'm not sure on the foreground. Those nearest trees are kind half there and half not there. Of course in a forest environment it can be impossible to get a clear view, without something poking up from the foreground. If that were the case here, then I would have zoomed back a little, or tilted the camera down a little, to include a little more of those trees.

Kelly

Canon 50D, Olympus PL2
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10 years 7 months ago #300161 by Shadowfixer1
Needs more contrast and some selective burning.
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10 years 7 months ago #300165 by Hassner
That white spot on the right looks like the perfect spot to take a shot without the trees in the foreground for a cleaner composition. There is no pure black or white in the image. That would help to create contrast.


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10 years 7 months ago #300211 by garyrhook
I like the mountain, I like the snow, I like the trees.

It needs a lot more contrast, for me. And, for me, it could use some clouds.

The composition doesn't work, however. The tops of the trees in the foreground seem an afterthought. The fact that the trees are snow-laden is awesome, but you didn't take advantage of that.

And the time of day was not ideal, either.

Sorry to be the bearer of bad tidings.


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