Help Please have a look Criticism required.

13 years 4 months ago - 13 years 4 months ago #34387 by qualityresults
I have been given some criticism, that I am unsure as to what I need to do to fix, now Here is the comments. I am open to any criticism but criticism doesn't help when I don't have examples.

The portfolio is in flash and I am not sure if that is hurting anything or not.

"While we think that you have an eye for photography, we'd like to see an improvement in your white balance before accepting you as a member of the team. The work itself is great but the "off" coloring stands out quite a bit." is the comment

www.wix.com/ronpalmerphotography/ron-palmer-photography

Portrait shots are right here

www.wix.com/ronpalmerphotography/gradphotography

In advanced I thank you all
as well as the pictures I have uploaded to my gallery.


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13 years 4 months ago #34392 by Baydream
Two things strike me as I looked at the portraits.
1) There are some "blown out" areas on some. Check your histogram. You will find a stack on the right side indicating there are areas in the photo that have no detail due to over exposure (pure white).
2) Some of the shots could benefit from fill flash. The faces are in both full sun (blown out) and shadows so details of teh lovely ladies is not there.
I hope this helps.

Shoot, learn and share. It will make you a better photographer.
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13 years 4 months ago #34394 by qualityresults
Always at least I can follow what that the comments given did not help me.

I also think something happened in the conversion process because they don't look like that in print.


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