car pics pls provide feedback :)

12 years 10 months ago #96797 by AQ-Photography






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12 years 10 months ago - 12 years 10 months ago #96947 by photobod
In the first one the sky looks very odd they dont look like clouds maybe you have over processed it.

In the second one just lose the red car at the rear it is oddly distracting. also the background is sharp whilst the foreground is blurred doesnt seem to equate. you seem to have blurred the other blue car but left the background, not sure why.

In the third one crop some of the grass out and the right hand window this should improve it.

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12 years 10 months ago #96955 by Baydream

photobod wrote: In the first one the sky looks very odd they dont look like clouds maybe you have over processed it.

In the second one just lose the red car at the rear it is oddly distracting. also the background is sharp whilst the foreground is blurred doesnt seem to equate. you seem to have blurred the other blue car but left the background, not sure why.

In the third one crop some of the grass out and the right hand window this should improve it.

:agree:
First one over-processed.
Second one - using a wide aperture (and the narrow DoF) has the rear of the car in focus and the front fuzzy.
Third one - mow the grass or move the car to a paved area. I like the angle, but that grass (ugh).

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12 years 10 months ago #97311 by mj~shutterbugg
:agree: These guys know more about this than me, I defer to their expertise. I applaud you on the wide variety in your portfolio.

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12 years 10 months ago #97329 by Rob pix4u2
Really like number one for the angle and perspective but sky detracts abit
really like three for the angle and the shot would look good if as john said the grass were mowed
much improvement needed on number two- too many distracting elements in the frame background
love the car though

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12 years 10 months ago #97655 by AQ-Photography
thnx for the feed back guys...1st time i ever shot a car (and this one was moving at 80mph!!!). i agree the 1st one ott...but the second one...its kind of hard to move car off the motorway lol.... but if i get another opportunity i shall try to time the shot so no other car is in shot...although personally i liked the fact other cars were moving in the opp direction...gives the pic abit more sense of speed and movement (my opinion)

but really appriciate evryones feed back...i've only been doing photography for 6months and these pics were in month 3!!! :P

thnx

abz


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12 years 9 months ago #111586 by mklinejr
I like the first and third photo. I would have liked to see a different sky instead of difference clouds inserted with PS and just bit brighter on the cars just to bring out a bit more detail in the shadows.

With all that said good job at 80!! lol

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12 years 9 months ago #111589 by redneckphotos
I agree number one awesome with out strange clouds
number two blinds me the glare off the hood wow I am also epileptic
I just don't care for much about three
first one :thumbsup:

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