Double Daylilies

12 years 9 months ago #114015 by dlabbee


Alright, I am putting myself out there, so be kind as this is my first photo I want you guys to look at. Nah, I am tough, I can take it. How else will I learn? Tell me what I can do better. Thanks.


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12 years 9 months ago #114034 by chasrich
I'll go first... rather than let you hang there in the breeze :rofl:

You filled the frame with color which is good. The colors seem a bit saturated for my taste. I tend to do the same thing with a lot of my shots so I might be overly sensitive to that. I'd be curious to know what, if any, post production you did on this. The colors certainly POP as a result which makes the photo seem unreal in a way.

The objective I think you are trying for is to make the bloom overwhelm the image. Try some different approaches to this kind of shot. Use a wide open aperture to get a more narrow depth of field. Blurring the background will also pop the subject. I'd also try some different lighting that might illuminate the flowers above the background. This is all things to try with the camera.

If I'm using software to enhance the original shot I always try to throttle my controls so my manipulations are undetectable. It is so easy to overboard. Can you post the original image without the post work? Comments could be separated a bit better and be more productive.

Congratulations, you passed the most difficult gauntlet we have. I vote you passed! :woohoo:

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12 years 9 months ago #114054 by Shadowfixer1
The colors are nice and the detail and sharpness are good. No problem there. What is the subject? This is a busy image and one doesn't know where to look. The hardest thing for most people to learn is that photography is to simplify. Simple images work. Eliminate what is not needed to support the image. Photography is a subtractive art. In other words, you have to decide what not to include in an image. If not, then all we would shoot would be wide angle images that include everything in site. Painting is an additive art. The artist has to decide what to add to the painting to create his vision. He starts with nothing and adds to his image.

I told you all that to tell you this. Decide on the subject and crop it.
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12 years 9 months ago #114068 by Dori
I will be nice...:whistle: Good shot!

Don't pi$$ me off, I am running out of room to store the bodies...

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12 years 9 months ago #114097 by dlabbee
That is the original shot no post production.

So, wider shot. Don't zoom so much and crop later. That way I blur the background and focus only on the blooms? You really have to be basic with me here.
Or, I should have focused on the stamens and made that the focus? Or maybe just one bloom instead of the whole group of them?
There are classes available at the local photo store, unfortunately they are always on a day I work. I will keep shooting and see what I can come up with.


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12 years 9 months ago #114148 by Baydream
Very good. We had a pro critique our images at our last camera club meeting and his opinion was, when shooting flower, shot ONE flower.
Use of a larger aperture (smaller f/stop) and getting close will reduce the amount of the photo that is in focus (DoF). Be careful when doing that and make sure the right area in sharp.
Amazing colour for no PP.

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12 years 9 months ago #114361 by photobod
Everybody jumps on the its too saturated bandwagon before they know the facts Dawna so dont worry about that, my style with flowers is to make the colors pop and many people have pounced on me saying to much work on it, yet sometimes there is no work whatsoever as in your lovely photo, although I do admit that a lot of my flowers are worked on, at the end of the day flowers are colourful and thats what they should do, scream color come look at me, the one thing I do agree with is to focus on one flower and maybe have other blooms in the background going out of focus so a wide open aperture is needed.

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12 years 9 months ago #114366 by Rob pix4u2
I happen to love the saturated color, very good sharpness, nice overall

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