Balance article in Outdoor Photographer

13 years 3 months ago - 13 years 3 months ago #22930 by Baydream
I just read a short article in OP on Balance and Texture. The article was good but the photo to illustrate it was, in my opinion, all wrong. They asked for comments and I gave them. Hope they will still let me view other articles from my fav mag.
www.outdoorphotographer.com/how-to/quick...m_campaign=fb_013111
What you you think?

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13 years 3 months ago #23230 by McBeth Photography

Baydream wrote: I just read a short article in OP on Balance and Texture. The article was good but the photo to illustrate it was, in my opinion, all wrong. They asked for comments and I gave them. Hope they will still let me view other articles from my fav mag.
www.outdoorphotographer.com/how-to/quick...m_campaign=fb_013111
What you you think?



Good eye, they could have used another photo to illustrate their point ....what is more, they should have.

It is what it is.
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13 years 3 months ago - 13 years 3 months ago #23250 by Scotty
"A successfully created composition is one in which the viewer can let their eyes flow through the photograph without feeling compelled to return to a specific spot because there’s too much weighting on a particular side."

What you said.

after reading the first sentence of paragraph three, I find that this photo does NOT do that. My eye is wandering all over the place and can not find a resting place.


The picture is a perfect example, did you read? :rofl: :rofl: :banana:

It's my favorite magazine as well.

When the last candle has been blown out
and the last glass of champagne has been drunk
All that you are left with are the memories and the images-David Cooke.

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13 years 3 months ago #23281 by Baydream

Scotty wrote: "A successfully created composition is one in which the viewer can let their eyes flow through the photograph without feeling compelled to return to a specific spot because there’s too much weighting on a particular side."

What you said.

after reading the first sentence of paragraph three, I find that this photo does NOT do that. My eye is wandering all over the place and can not find a resting place.


The picture is a perfect example, did you read? :rofl: :rofl: :banana:

It's my favorite magazine as well.

I reread the article and don't see where they make it clear that this is a poor example, if that was their intention. The article would make more impact had they shown both a "good" and "bad" example.

Shoot, learn and share. It will make you a better photographer.
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13 years 3 months ago #23315 by Ogy55
Thanks baydream, I love outdoor photographer magazine. :goodpost:


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13 years 3 months ago #23406 by Scotty

Baydream wrote:

Scotty wrote: "A successfully created composition is one in which the viewer can let their eyes flow through the photograph without feeling compelled to return to a specific spot because there’s too much weighting on a particular side."

What you said.

after reading the first sentence of paragraph three, I find that this photo does NOT do that. My eye is wandering all over the place and can not find a resting place.


The picture is a perfect example, did you read? :rofl: :rofl: :banana:

It's my favorite magazine as well.

I reread the article and don't see where they make it clear that this is a poor example, if that was their intention. The article would make more impact had they shown both a "good" and "bad" example.


I thought you said you thought this was a bad example, now you're saying you don't see where this is a where they say it's a bad example?

I think it's a good example. I do agree though that it would have been better to show a bad example along with it.

When the last candle has been blown out
and the last glass of champagne has been drunk
All that you are left with are the memories and the images-David Cooke.

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13 years 3 months ago #23430 by Baydream

Scotty wrote:

Baydream wrote:

Scotty wrote: "A successfully created composition is one in which the viewer can let their eyes flow through the photograph without feeling compelled to return to a specific spot because there’s too much weighting on a particular side."

What you said.

after reading the first sentence of paragraph three, I find that this photo does NOT do that. My eye is wandering all over the place and can not find a resting place.


The picture is a perfect example, did you read? :rofl: :rofl: :banana:

It's my favorite magazine as well.

I reread the article and don't see where they make it clear that this is a poor example, if that was their intention. The article would make more impact had they shown both a "good" and "bad" example.


I thought you said you thought this was a bad example, now you're saying you don't see where this is a where they say it's a bad example?

I think it's a good example. I do agree though that it would have been better to show a bad example along with it.

My mind and fingers don't seem to be fully cooperating today. I did NOT like it as a good example because my eye could not settle anywhere. Nothing led me to a focus point and I was constantly moving around trying to find the "focal subject". Can you help?

Shoot, learn and share. It will make you a better photographer.
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13 years 3 months ago #23438 by Scotty

Baydream wrote:

Scotty wrote:

Baydream wrote:

Scotty wrote: "A successfully created composition is one in which the viewer can let their eyes flow through the photograph without feeling compelled to return to a specific spot because there’s too much weighting on a particular side."

What you said.

after reading the first sentence of paragraph three, I find that this photo does NOT do that. My eye is wandering all over the place and can not find a resting place.


The picture is a perfect example, did you read? :rofl: :rofl: :banana:

It's my favorite magazine as well.

I reread the article and don't see where they make it clear that this is a poor example, if that was their intention. The article would make more impact had they shown both a "good" and "bad" example.


I thought you said you thought this was a bad example, now you're saying you don't see where this is a where they say it's a bad example?

I think it's a good example. I do agree though that it would have been better to show a bad example along with it.

My mind and fingers don't seem to be fully cooperating today. I did NOT like it as a good example because my eye could not settle anywhere. Nothing led me to a focus point and I was constantly moving around trying to find the "focal subject". Can you help?


lol it's alright.

The point of the picture is NOT to have a certain focal point. It's supposed to flow with contrast and texture all the way through.


"A successfully created composition is one in which the viewer can let their eyes flow through the photograph without feeling compelled to return to a specific spot because there’s too much weighting on a particular side."

^That's what that means.

When the last candle has been blown out
and the last glass of champagne has been drunk
All that you are left with are the memories and the images-David Cooke.

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13 years 3 months ago #23737 by Hamtastic
Good thread... However I disagree, I think this photo works for the message given. They are talking about composition and balance... Looking at the photo, your eyes are able sweep the entire photo without locking down on one area, this IMHO is balance.


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13 years 3 months ago #23796 by Scotty

Hamtastic wrote: Good thread... However I disagree, I think this photo works for the message given. They are talking about composition and balance... Looking at the photo, your eyes are able sweep the entire photo without locking down on one area, this IMHO is balance.



That's what I said ;)

When the last candle has been blown out
and the last glass of champagne has been drunk
All that you are left with are the memories and the images-David Cooke.

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13 years 3 months ago #24556 by Stealthy Ninja

Scotty wrote:

Hamtastic wrote: Good thread... However I disagree, I think this photo works for the message given. They are talking about composition and balance... Looking at the photo, your eyes are able sweep the entire photo without locking down on one area, this IMHO is balance.



That's what I said ;)


LOL this thread is epic. :banana:
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